Tuesday, September 18, 2012

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The video I choose was Barack Obama's Promises Kept, I chose this video because it really stood out to me than the other videos. This video was about Barack given his nomination speech back in 2008. I found this very interesting because throughout the video it showed everything that he promised that he had accomplished. The music in the video fit the video ever so perfectly, uplifting in the right spots, it was great. The style of the video was really great to, it was very fluid and it seemed to just flow ever so smoothly, it felt like I wasn't watching a campaign video, but a movie in theaters, which I thought was great rhetoric because everybody gets burnt out on politics, so they incorporated into a movie feeling to get rid of the politics feeling, but at the same time, also giving people politics. This video was by far the best one that I saw, and I really liked it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=lA2fCs-_fyo

4 comments:

  1. This is great. It very much accentuates the important rhetorical elements of the video. Although I think the word "one" in reference to Barack Obama's advertisement is a poor choice in words, overall, your paragraph is well written and concise. Well done!

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  2. I really like your approach of choosing an older speech and showing what Obama has followed through with. Your in depth analysis of the music made me really feel like this ad was uplifting without even watching it. The extreme detail explained in your paragraph makes me want to watch this ad with the hopes of not getting a political vibe. Great job!

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  3. great job! I like your word choice and analysis!(:

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  4. Very good word choice. It definitely flows together and makes for a good paragraph. Great job!

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